My Try At a Sonnet

For English last year, I had to write a Sonnet, and here is mine, please post your thoughts, I'm unsure if i like it, what is your opinion?

Shakespearean Sonnet

Fairies Fairies, sitting on white cherries,

Spirits Spirits, coming every second singing lyrics

Fairies Fairies, laughing all the while eating berries

Spirits Spirits, nervously chanting myrics

People People, ignorant as a brick

Fairies Spirits, wreaking havoc for all to see

People People, don’t know their eyes trick

Witches Witches, ignoring all the screeches while sipping tea

Gnomes Gnomes, just can’t seem to get it right

Fairies Spirits People all missing the key